Monday, August 15, 2016

To the Slaughter - Part One

This week's story was another joint effort between me and my oldest son David Zaragoza, who is turning into a fantastic writer himself.

My next Sanctuary side story isn't finished yet, so I thought I would share this one of ours for your enjoyment. My son provided the concept of the story and the characters, and I just did the cleaning and polishing til it shone.

It's a little on the longish side, so I'll be posting a piece of it all this week. Five parts.

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To the Slaughter - Part One
By David Zaragoza and Dianna Zaragoza
 
The king of the Gosprin empire many sun-cycles ago loved war, fairness and discipline. This gave rise to the belief that royal consorts should be warrior kings and queens. And so the pageantry and brutality of 'The Seven Slaughter’ began. 

Every time the eldest prince or princess came of age, seven warriors from each of the seven regions of the empire were chosen. They were put into an arena, and forced to fight to the death to marry the royal heir.



Now seven generations had passed on since the nascence of this most wondrous and feared event, and the next-in-line, the young Prince Reeves, would marry during this cycle...

Ana Serofore lived in region Fordwick, the last living child of her father Grante Serofore, surnamed after the land of his birth. She and her mother struggled to survive together. Ana always hated the notion of war, as it took her father and two older brothers. Her mother shared her feelings, but cautioned her to not rebel against the king for fear of losing her as well…dissenters were often the first of the regular drafts to the Deswish battlefront. As a result, she always kept her true feelings bottled up inside when talking to others.

Since it was now three sunrises into the seven-phase, Ana found it the perfect time for wandering the stalls in the centersquare. Every third sunrise, around ten tics in, she dressed in comfortable clothes and walked down to the picturesque centersquare to gather the grains and seeds and fruits for the family meals. Although Fordwick did not attract many wanderers from afar, it had its fair share of merchants come about to sell various goods as well. Ana rarely came here to buy goods for their meager living space, though. 

She came because of Thom.

This Thom caught her attention as soon as she saw him, with his short black hair, tawny brown eyes, a rugged face, and a fair smile. Compared to the other merchants, who sold weapons, tools and medicine, he sold frivolous vanity items, small instruments and writing materials, many of them made by himself. According to him, the vendor stall was a hobby of his, and the other stock was whatever he could buy with what little money he obtained. He never seemed to profit like the more practical vendors, but his passion and enthusiasm for his unique items were obvious for anyone to see. 

A simple, good man. That's why Ana liked their visits.

“Good rise to you, Thom,” she greeted him. The young man turned to face her, a smile spreading on his face.

“Ah, welcome to my shop,” he said. “How are you this fine sunrise?”

“Well, it is third cycle,” she replies. “Not much happening so far.”

“I see, I see.” The young man scratches his chin, his eyes raised with a thoughtful, playful smile. They had this same conversation at almost every meeting, with slight variations. “I could say the same myself, not many sales at this time.”

“Maybe what you sell is just not to people's liking,” she said. “Can I have a look today?”

The young man nodded with a smile, and gestured to a stand full of hand-crafted jewelry. Some are simple string necklaces with a small jewel or medallion attached, while others are bracelets embroidered with tiny shells or beads. 

“Beautiful.”



One accessory in particular caught Ana's attention; a tiny ring made of the softest bladespray cloth, with a tree seed threaded through it. She picked it up to examine it. It doesn't seem like a ring, even though it could easily fit on someone's finger.

“What is this?” She inquires of the merchant youth.

“It's a hair tie,” he explains. “It’s a decoration for your hair. They're growing quite popular in the royal city, so I thought I’d attempt to make some myself. Took me a few tries to get it right, though.”

“How much for it?” 

“For you, Ana, I'd say about...” 

A loud noise echoed through the streets, just as Thom attempted to name his price. From the town entrance arch, a massive carriage drawn by Morey-dragons bursts into the town, careening around the market until it stopped in front of the youthful merchant’s stand. 

A tall, regally-dressed man stepped out of the carriage and into the main thoroughfare. The color of his clothes resembled those of the crown prince's.

“Get behind me, Ana…quickly!” Thom grabbed her arm and drew her two steps back.

“Citizens of Fordwick, an order from his Highness the King. It is his decree that the empire’s most eligible women must participate next moon-cycle in this year’s Slaughter of Seven Maidens.”

“Oh no…” Ana heard Thom whisper in the darkened tent, the lights turned down by degrees so as not to attract attention.

“A champion is chosen at random, and she shall return with us to the royal city of Reeseward, where she shall fight to the death for the honor of the prince’s hand and heart.”

Ana's eyes widened in fear. Not the Slaughter. Not now.

“To your left, Ana. Go!” Her sudden instinct to run away sparked by Thom’s urgent whispering kicked in, and she headed down the stone steps behind the tent, back towards the forests and her home. No sooner had she moved than one of the royal guards spotted her.

“Hey, stop you!” 

Ana heard the sound of clinking metal footsteps and raised voices behind her. The dishonor of her actions would reflect on her entire family if they caught her. Her speed increased, as did the speed of the soldiers. 

They were better suited to run than she, but Ana had one distinct advantage: her intimate knowledge of the town. Having lived here her entire life, she knew the best places to duck into and hide. She grabbed a nearby empty barrel, and tossed it behind her at the guards to slow them down. Then she picked up speed. 


She hoped to catch the corner and hide in some nearby shops, but another group of footmen appeared in front of her. They cornered her; she couldn’t escape. Like a frightened cat, she turned into a nearby alley that ended in a tall white wall and soldiers on either side. As the soldiers came closer, she closed her eyes and pressed herself down against the center of the wall.

Please no…this can’t be happening…

“Well, well,” the familiar voice of the prince's agent sent a shock of terror through her. “You have caused a disturbance, young lady. It almost seems to me as if you don't want selection for the Slaughter, but that isn’t possible. Who could turn down such an honor? Bind her.”

The soldiers seized her by the arms. Ana struggles to break free, but her kicking and flailing didn’t do much against the soldiers' firm grips and heavy armor. 

“Be careful, now. I may get the idea you’re not as honored as you should be. That wouldn’t be good for your friend from the market back there who tried to hide you. You see, now if you don’t fight, he dies. If you die, he dies. A little motivation to help you appreciate the opportunity you’ve received."

He gestured to the other men, pointing at Ana. "Back to the arena. Selection’s been made.”

She tried to spot Thom among the soldiers who shoved her in the closest transport and the crowd drawn by her resistance, but he was nowhere in sight. She knew they held him somewhere close by, in one of the trail of carriages that now lined the outskirts of the town.

“No…help me someone! Please tell my mother what happened. Thom!”

The faces in the crowd told her their own stories – small nods of response to her request, pity for her, relief that someone else was chosen, fear of the guard's retaliation if they tried to assist. She was alone. 



Tears of fright streamed down Ana's face as the carriage drives away, with her bound and helpless inside.

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On to Part Two tomorrow...

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